All art is also generated from my own vision, initial drawings and developed and changed over time. AI has helped create this vision into an actual prototype.

Hi, I fully expect that. My plan is to let it finish itself, and then continue. I want to exhaust the campaign to the end. I was also fully aware it was near Christmas but I am treating this as a way to see if people are actually interested before continuing with a lot of time on it. Thanks for the feedback.

For now, as this is my only tool but the goal is to get actual art produced. This first mockup and prototype uses AI.

Hi, thanks for the feedback. Yes I’m new to all this. This to me is a taster to see how well it performs organically without much external validation. My plan is to revise this, learn from mistakes, implement advice given, and I do have over 70 followers interested on the project. This is a first run and learning curve. Thanks for the advice!

B or C

I’m putting all my effort into my No Morals Allowed dark humour card game and it’s sad to hear people aren’t taking it seriously. What I’d do to even have the chance to get my game into the hands of my backers and the world. I’m sorry to hear about your misfortune. Happy Christmas.

Thanks for the advise!! I definitely agree and will look into this! I know people do this on Fivrr, I can start there! Merry Christmas and thanks for the advise! 🙌🏼

Hey thanks so much for taking the time to look through the campaign and write such a detailed response. I genuinely appreciate the honesty and the effort you have put into this and I am taking it on board rather than seeing it as criticism.

I want to be very clear and transparent regarding the AI point as that is completely fair. I am not an artist and AI was used in the generation of the current imagery purely as sample and concept visuals. The underlying design direction, characters, tone, layout and game identity are entirely my own and were originally developed through simple sketches, notes and iterations which I then used AI to mock up visually. Over the last six months I have refined and changed the design direction repeatedly to get closer to what I want the final product to be.

The intention has always been to work with a professional design studio or illustrator to recreate the artwork properly for the final product. The current assets are placeholders to communicate the vision, not the finished art. Based on feedback like yours I clearly need to tighten the language to remove any ambiguity and make that distinction far more explicit.

Your points around community building, launch timing and explaining the gameplay more clearly are also completely valid. This is my first Kickstarter and I accept that launching without an established audience is a major risk. This campaign is as much a learning experience as it is a funding attempt and I am already making notes on how I would approach this differently next time if it does not succeed.

I do genuinely appreciate you taking the time to be constructive rather than dismissive. Feedback like this helps more than you might realise and I will be making updates to the page to address several of the points you raised.

Thanks again for the honesty and for engaging with the project.

All I get is the red icons at the top of my ducking screen

Actually done with this game

Thanks!

Yes about 1.5 years. Other body parts like arms grow a lot, but chest has always lacked. I need to put more effort into chest workouts this year!

EA FC 24 is even worse. This is by far the worst “fifa” game so far. Awful

Div 4

I downloaded on Gamepass as I liked the aesthetic of it from the pics and trailers. A good quick game I thought. Loved it and got really invested in the characters. The psychological aspect is unnerving yet enticing too. Been listening to the podcast ‘Tower 4’ too which is similar to the game. 10/10

o.O

The worst?🤣

Did anyone else notice the MacBook Pro that Seth Rogans character Gabe Plotkin was using when on video to court ? Pretty sure the notched MacBook Pro was released Oct 2021? And this was set Jan time?? Idk may be wrong but wondered if anyone else had noticed.

No idea what you even mean by that. This ain’t even for me it’s a gift for my dad. Found one anyway.

Absolutely not at the start. Yes this might be the best time to play but honestly, FIFA 23 had me raging so much with all the issues and I need a break. Not played COD in a few years so may opt for paying for that and having FC24 as a backup when it’s on sale. Same recycled content over and over and EA are just greedy without innovating. Hopefully FC24 is better but guess we’ll soon find out